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This is the postal service for Britain and Australia. Sorry, there was a comic that this is from but I decided to take it down. Apologies if you favd it.
I'm rather pleased with them both, although Royal Mail might be a little broad across the chest and Australia Post's arms look a little odd. I thought the expressions went rather well ^^
I used a Senshistock reference for the position of Royal Mail's fingers.
I'm rather pleased with them both, although Royal Mail might be a little broad across the chest and Australia Post's arms look a little odd. I thought the expressions went rather well ^^
I used a Senshistock reference for the position of Royal Mail's fingers.
Image size
1066x1138px 76.29 KB
Make
HP
Model
HP Scanjet dj_d02c
Date Taken
Apr 8, 2011, 10:44:43 PM
© 2011 - 2024 Loni-Jay
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The proportions of the left girl do make her seem older and bigger; if this is intentional, she's meant to be larger and more full-figured, that's good, but if not, you may want to tweak the shoulders, the chest, and the hips/thighs to be a little slimmer. Also give them both a little more neck, the left girl especially. The wrinkles on the knees can be omitted entirely, they don't look right and just detract. If you do want wrinkles/folds around the knees, and to make your legs a bit more natural, try narrowing things slightly at the knee area and then widening again, and try to make a couple wrinkles/bumps right on the outline where the joint is.
The left girl's head and hands could be a bit bigger (or, the head could be raised a little/give some neck, and the other features mentioned previously slightly slimmed) and the hat should be more... round and high. More of a semicircle.
It's good that you're drawing full figures, instead of cutting off at the legs or chest like a lot of beginners do, and trying to practice hands instead of always hiding them. Using references is good. One of the great things about hands is that you always have a free one to practice drawing. Remember that a person's hand is typically big enough to cover their face (check with your own hand) . It's a common beginner mistake to draw very small hands. Your feet are a little formless, but they're pretty hard to nail. Try making the bottoms of the feet completely flat, so they look like they're flat to the floor, and then experiment/look at other's drawings to see if you can find a way to draw them a bit more realistically.
You have very clean dark lines, which is good. The proportions are overall okay, and I think you did pretty well with the right girl in particular. Their designs are a little plain though. Clothing, hair, accessories, can be fun to mess with.
<3 ali
The left girl's head and hands could be a bit bigger (or, the head could be raised a little/give some neck, and the other features mentioned previously slightly slimmed) and the hat should be more... round and high. More of a semicircle.
It's good that you're drawing full figures, instead of cutting off at the legs or chest like a lot of beginners do, and trying to practice hands instead of always hiding them. Using references is good. One of the great things about hands is that you always have a free one to practice drawing. Remember that a person's hand is typically big enough to cover their face (check with your own hand) . It's a common beginner mistake to draw very small hands. Your feet are a little formless, but they're pretty hard to nail. Try making the bottoms of the feet completely flat, so they look like they're flat to the floor, and then experiment/look at other's drawings to see if you can find a way to draw them a bit more realistically.
You have very clean dark lines, which is good. The proportions are overall okay, and I think you did pretty well with the right girl in particular. Their designs are a little plain though. Clothing, hair, accessories, can be fun to mess with.
<3 ali